Yes you have raised a nice topic and hopefully people get the message of your post.
Jan 09, 2009 Rating
Being proactive.. by: Christine
Other commenter before me were a bit harsh, I think. Based on the writing style, I'm assuming that Anna is a young child. Hearing someone that young take a proactive stance in caring for the environment and her surroundings is great.
It's refreshing to see that not all kids only care about themselves and how to get their hands on the latest PS3 game.
It would have helped to have clarified that Anna was not a grown woman - if she was, then I have to agree with the other posters that she needs to think with more substance.
Jan 09, 2009 Rating
Maybe some more substance by: Wendy
Like I said in my previous post it seems juvenile.
In addition to what I said earlier, you could add much more to this article. The site itself seems promising though considering today's interest in such topics as global warming, energy conservation and natural resource conservation. More meat in the articles and addressed to maybe teens and adults would be much more productive. Good Luck!
Jan 09, 2009 Rating
Wendy by: Anonymous
It sounded as though you may be speaking to young children. These are very simple steps, commonly suggested. Perhaps something a bit more in depth? For example how about an article on reducing energy costs by installing solar panels or switching to other alternative forms of heating and cooling for your home. Or maybe an article on other forms of transportation such as mass transit or hybrid vehicles and why buying or investing in these types of transportation alternatives would help the environment AND the economy. Hope that was some constructive criticism :)
Jan 09, 2009 Rating
It is... by: Anonymous
trite, tedious, and short-sighted...
Apr 07, 2008 Rating
yawn.... by: Anonymous
i liked it but u shoul dn't act like the "Goody two shoes Queen!!!!!!! Forgive if i was rude but stuff like wat u said really ticks me off!!
